Standards 2.0 and 2.1

An autobiographical narrative showing my command of English writing

One of the most difficult things to do in writing this short story, was the inspiration. I did not know what to write about at all until I thought about myself and what I had just went through. I wrote this piece my junior year, and I had just moved to San Francisco. Therefore I took all of my feelings, and my emotion and I put them on paper. I think that makes this piece, one of my best work, because It shows how I felt at that time, and how hard it was for me to settle and accept that I had moved and I had literaly started a new life away from everything I knew. I think that everytime I write a new paper, I grew as a writer, because I had learned new words from the previous papers. Also because I felt more comfortable with writing and expresing myselft without being scared or afraid of what people might think about my work if they read it. In order to complete this assignment, I had to first think about myself, and get my inspiration, then wirte out as a draft so finally someone revised it, and I could write the final piece. Because of all of these skills, I think I have met the standards above.

Moving.